Wow, i didn't know that band 5 is considered bad...
I plan to take MUET in April too, and if i get band 5, i won't decide to retake anymore...
I have some tips for Writing, question 1:
The essay must have:
1. an Overview (O) - "The graph shows..."
2. an Overall Trend (OT) - an overall description of the visual: going up, down...
3. Key Features (KF) - must state ALL the items involved. If there's a comparison on 5 types of fruits, you must mention all five, you can't just tell about 3 or 4...
The difference between Analysis (A) and Description (D):
1. Analysis is stating the values and the key features: "There were 1000 people in year 2004, while it increased to 2550 people in year 2005"
2. Description is only describing (nonsense...): "There was an increase in the number of people from year 2004 to year 2005."
Please use Analysis! Use Description only when there's no figures...
Synthesis (S):
The analysis in an analysis: You analyse the figures. It requires some simple counting... - "There was an increase of 1550 (not shown in the graph) people from year 2004 to 2005."
Do you get me? This is also very important compared to analysis. Which means, a good essay must have both...
Conclusion (C):
Here is the part where you add in the linear text (newspaper clippings, footnotes found after the graph...)
Assumptions (Assm):
Never put in assumptions! Like - The amount of people decreased because of @#$! There will be no marks for reasons...
150 to 200 words:
Never go beyond 200 words, cos they won't even look at them. Make sure your conclusion is before your 200th word...
Hope that helps!