Pantun Hari raya

[Keiko123]

Originally Posted by starlover

why this pantun got no rangkap?hehe

What's rangkap? Stanza is it? I don't know how to write pantun la... It's done randomly...
Haha... my BM rusted already...

[luke]

Has been a year,
It comes again;
Selamat Hari Raya,
Maaf Zahir Batin.

Mountain Daik's branches got three,
Pandan Island is far far in the middle;
With friends, relatives and family,
Hari raya is time to mingle.

If your garden got hot spring,
May I take a dip in it please?;
Balik kampung time better no speeding,
Unless you wanna give bonus to the police.

Push wood pull wood,
Keranji fruit inside a boat;
Hari raya got lots of food,
But don't eat too much like a goat.

Two three cats run run,
Where got the same as the striped one;
That's all for me I gotta run,
Duit raya? Where got one?

Jackfuit just outside the yard,
With bamboo stick give it a whack;
Salam aidilfitri from the bottom of my heart,
If you want more, wait till I get back.

[starlover]

Originally Posted by luke

Has been a year,
It comes again;
Selamat Hari Raya,
Maaf Zahir Batin.

Mountain Daik's branches got three,
Pandan Island is far far in the middle;
With friends, relatives and family,
Hari raya is time to mingle.

If your garden got hot spring,
May I take a dip in it please?;
Balik kampung time better no speeding,
Unless you wanna give bonus to the police.

Push wood pull wood,
Keranji fruit inside a boat;
Hari raya got lots of food,
But don't eat too much like a goat.

Two three cats run run,
Where got the same as the striped one;
That's all for me I gotta run,
Duit raya? Where got one?

Jackfuit just outside the yard,
With bamboo stick give it a whack;
Salam aidilfitri from the bottom of my heart,
If you want more, wait till I get back.

so funny!wahahaha

keiko,actually i tak pandai buat pantun too

[technicolor]

Originally Posted by luke

Has been a year,
It comes again;
Selamat Hari Raya,
Maaf Zahir Batin.

Mountain Daik's branches got three,
Pandan Island is far far in the middle;
With friends, relatives and family,
Hari raya is time to mingle.

If your garden got hot spring,
May I take a dip in it please?;
Balik kampung time better no speeding,
Unless you wanna give bonus to the police.

Push wood pull wood,
Keranji fruit inside a boat;
Hari raya got lots of food,
But don't eat too much like a goat.

Two three cats run run,
Where got the same as the striped one;
That's all for me I gotta run,
Duit raya? Where got one?

Jackfuit just outside the yard,
With bamboo stick give it a whack;
Salam aidilfitri from the bottom of my heart,
If you want more, wait till I get back.

Wahh so creative